Poetry of Egal Bohen Cornwall England: The Balance (Death of a Song Thrush)

Wednesday, 28 January 2009

The Balance (Death of a Song Thrush)

Life is a balance
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All
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The
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Way
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Indulgence leads
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Where pleasure plays
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You gain

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You lose

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Your choice

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You choose

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Beware
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The balance though
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It moves

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Egal Bohen

6 comments:

I, Like The View said...: yes, indeed

and sometimes we don't realise what our choices will bring

until we make them

a beautiful poem, as ever

thank you; 8 February 2009 at 13:41
Egal Bohen said...: I,LTV,

Thank you and I am sorry - consider my ass well kicked.

Sincerely

Egal..; 9 March 2009 at 00:06
I, Like The View said...: I don't understand why you are sorry, Egal.., or what you have to be sorry about. . .

my comment was more of a personal reflection - I apologise if I confused you!

(-:; 10 March 2009 at 17:19
Egal Bohen said...: I,ltv,
I am not confused, just sorry that I did not respond to your lovely comment when I published it... and I know from reading your blog that you kick the ass of silent subscribers who do not respond!!

Your comment was a beautiful personal reflection and I just felt a bit guilty I had published it and then forgotten to thank you, thats all!

Hope you are OK

Sincerely

Egal..; 10 March 2009 at 21:44
I, Like The View said...: oh. . . I'd forgotten about that (the ass-kicking!)

your poetry is always an inspiration, prompting a personal response - but that doesn't mean I expect one from you if I comment

(-:

I hope you are OK; 11 March 2009 at 07:51
Egal Bohen said...: Great, I can relax and forget I forgot!

Egal..; 11 March 2009 at 20:09

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